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Pretty funny, I was actually expecting a monstrosity of all the overdone jokes that pokemon and dbz parodies tend to have, but this was original.

Keep up the good work. :)

I mean....the animation was good although jagged at sometimes...but the audio was horrible, high pitched, and quite honestly I can tell that whoever sung the song can't really carry a tune well. I even tried to put my volume at its lowest and it still hurt my ears....

Original idea....horrible audio. I'm going straight down the middle with this rating because quite honestly if I have to mute my speakers to watch something through...yeah.

And this is why woman need to stay in their kitchen and make their own sandwiches.

I liked Beyblade, but since I still want to fuck your brains out, have a five. :D

Speedo responds:

So did I, we can all laugh at things being made fun of even if we like those things *coughs, points at reviews section on previous video*

And I approve of the second part, though you have to buy me dinner first ;) ;) <3 ;) xoxo ;) <3 <3 ;)

I fucking love you.

Hahahaha, this was great. Did you upload this to stickpage? It would probably get more appreciation there. Most of Newgrounds is prejudice against stick man videos. :P

Jomm responds:

All my longer stuff goes on stickpage, I keep my shorter stuff on YouTube but due to copyright I needed to take a lot of stuff down, NG is kind of just my place holder for animations to show around lol. Thanks for the nice words though!

Okay....

So the jist of this Flash is, Pikachu says no to the trainer, so it gets kicked.

That's it. That's all there is.

Considering how Pokemon has been done to death, this is all you could come up with? Well, whatever. Here's my critique.

There was little to no animation in this video, but from what I saw you need more work. It just looks like a bunch of key frames smashed together when the trainer is speaking(also Pikachu). Then you move the trainers symbol a little while you had an irrelevant song playing(After "Whatcha Say" the rest has nothing to do with the Flash). Not even sure what you did to make Pikachu move but it looks odd. Still, despite this since you at least attempted you get a half star for that.

The other half star is for your art. It's not the best but you have a style I can differentiate. Not sure if that was on purpose or not. I was disappointed at the end when you decided to be lazy and scribble the third and last scene of your Flash. It would have been forgivable if you put effort into it, but you didn't.

Someone said this had potential, and I agree. However, you just decided to be lazy and not take your time with it, as indicated from the last scene. I suggest making more of an effort on the actual content of your movies and of course the art. Don't half ass it. You start out with a certain quality keep that quality going until the end.

Oh, the other star was for the loader. At least it doesn't loop, can't tell you how annoying it is.

I know you can do better, I look forward to your next video.

JoeliusNG responds:

thanks for the honest review man, I'll try to put more work and frame by frame animation in my next animation :3

I don't really understand why you drew the woman but not the other people in the movie. I'd suggest drawing everyone instead of using stick figures, it really makes me think you traced the girl...You could have at least added shadows or something because she looks extremely flat.

Also make sure you add a play button so that it doesn't loop, it's fine now because there is no sound to it but when there is it gets annoying to listen to when you write reviews.

Actual animation itself was very little so I can't give any opinion on that.

And don't be one of those animators who rely on memes to gain popularity. The troll face and megusta face isn't necessary. Make up your own facial expressions. Be unique.

I really enjoy your style of drawing. Pretty funny and loved the pinkie pie references. Favorited you for future videos. :)

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